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Wow and you did a phenomenal job!

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Thank you 🙏🏻

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I really enjoyed this.The reminder that we can still choose to do what’s right, even in the chaos, really resonates—thank you for sharing this.

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Right on! thanks for reading it

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This is both intense and excellent writing. All the way through, the body flows together, created as one piece. Incredible work.

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🙏🏻 thank you Jennifer

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Love these lines: “I see insight only a few might,

I see the sun through the moonlight,

Redemption when the doom’s bright.”

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Thanks for the feedback. I really enjoy when people mention the parts that stood out to them. Speaking of which, Cassandra that submitted, her measure is pretty much flawless. Her pen is on steroids

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I need to read more of her work. I know nothing, formally that’s, about meter. I’ve tried to learn, but never could [w]rap my head around it lol (sorry, I had to) … but seriously, I don’t really get it, meter, that is.

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Are you submitting this week?

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Yes, I have a draft going 👀😬. Are you working on writing something?

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Yeah it’s going to be hard for me not to. I’ve never messed with prompts but the challenge kind of has me hooked

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Same on both parts. Im excited how this will develop into new songs or ideas ect. Like a fun experience, plus, its cool to meet new people like your self 🙏🏽. I'll be on the look out for your joint when you share ☺️

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